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Thursday, July 30, 2020

The Magical Dragon - Whakarua 4

hope you enjoy

1 comment:

  1. Hi Bry,
    My name is Mrs McIntyre from South Hornby School. I LOVED reading your story about Beowolf, I am not sure I would like him, or his little brother, in my class though! Fancy throwing water balloons at the King! I like that you are really good at using full stops, your words were easy to read and you had an eye catching background. Are you keen to continue writing part 2 of this story?
    Have a great day,
    Mrs McIntyre

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