I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, July 30, 2020
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Bry,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mrs McIntyre from South Hornby School. I LOVED reading your story about Beowolf, I am not sure I would like him, or his little brother, in my class though! Fancy throwing water balloons at the King! I like that you are really good at using full stops, your words were easy to read and you had an eye catching background. Are you keen to continue writing part 2 of this story?
Have a great day,
Mrs McIntyre