today in writing we had to write a dire of a soldier also check out my friends blogs to josh and victor:) I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, June 2, 2021
today in writing we had to write a dire of a soldier also check out my friends blogs to josh and victor:) 1 comment:
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Hi bry its josh.I realy liked your story of the war because it sounded real and you added some of your own touches like ragnar and your friends me and victor.I think you could of writed more about intense but i realy liked your story.Hope you got some information from this comment.
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